Quote Originally Posted by H Dean View Post
Wow, it looks like she got to this piece in a big way. Good job, Ladystouch. There are few things more enjoyable than watching my friend's get ripped!

Aussie, I notice that the students find more fun in critiquing your stories than mine. I guess you have more screw ups than I.

Man, I like being mean!
LOL Well, even though Lady C has already stood up for me, I also have to agree with you. I know there are a LOT of things to fix in that first chapter of mine, which makes it is perfect piece for students to pull apart!

I am glad it gives you so much amusment to see it being ripped apart, as a friend I am pleased to see you happy!