Quote Originally Posted by Ozme52
Which is why I sent it to Rabbit first, but he said go for it.

It's not an attack on the author and says something about the story's construction. But like all criticisms, it's just an opinion.

Oh well, I expect to get a bit beaten up for this. All comments will be passed onto Rabbit... so he can share in my infamy.
Who beat you up? Oz...all of those who review will get some unhappy authors and they let us know it, but don't let that stop you from voicing your opinion. And I'm glad Rabbit had you post your opinion. You know the phrase about opinions, don't you? *wink