Quote Originally Posted by graphix View Post
Any Comments? Has anyone read this?

Good.. bad... alright... I'll take anything!
Hello, Graphix,

Thank you for sharing your story. You have a great imagination, and are very good at describing imagery.

Have you considered the Writer's Block? There, experienced writers give you writing assignments, then offer suggestions on how you can improve your work.

If you just want to share your work, you can post it at the BDSM Library, where most viewers go to look for new stories to read. They can also offer you feedback and review your stories.

Hope this helps. Good Luck!