A vote? from me?

*thinks hard.. scratches the beard she does not have, tries her none existant hairs instead... does not work either...turns the story around in her head...*

I still like it but it gets not as high a voting as the rest. your chapters get shorter and shorter.. and you were better in describing her feelings in the beginning.. she somehow jumped from a newbie to someone who can take even some of the more extreme things without much hesitancy or so... get what I mean? Also the description of this scene is pretty short and not so detailed compared with what you have already created before... I know that you could do better *grin*. You´ll get a 6 for this, an eight to the whole story, and a 9-10 for the first 4 chapters.

I´ll vote in the library section once you´re finished.. but I´m thinking about letting you wait for some time..

;-)