Is anybody interested in shredding this assignment to pulp, or possibly framing it? At this point, I'd be happy with either.

I realize that all of the instructors are probably very busy, but I would appreciate some feedback on this one. I don't know if stories are like bread, but if they are, this one is starting to get stale waiting on the shelf for somebody to look over it.

Are there any kind souls willing to look this one over for me please?