Well written but I won´t vote on it in the library section as due to my taste, and only because of that, I´d have to give bad marks: too far from my taste ... too brutal and as far as i read none of the "victims" liked even a little bit what happened to him/her and I generally don´t like the female to take the dominant part in stories . As i don´t want your fist rating to be a bad one for a well written story that may be to others taste.. you see my dilemma?
I liked the description of Liliths steel bondage though and the way you build your story.. just not enough romance and emotion for me little girl *friendly grin (doesn´t always have to be mean)*



besides i found a little mistake.
"her right foot shot forwards and crushed the guard's face.
"Damn!", she thought while she waved her long hair back over her shoulders.
"I'm leaving too much bodies behind."" -> too many!


*very nasty and evil grin because now again you get no chance to get your evil laugh rated higher than rubberwolves*


hugs, deigja