Babe, it looks good so far. Yum. Lucky Mr Simpson! You can take this story any way you want - I'm working on a "school" story myself (for adult girls as I'm not into teens), and the problem isn't coming up with saucy ideas, the problem is where to stop! You can have sexy bullying, passionate lesbianism, group torture, individual torture, cross-country running. Everything! It's great.
But if your sampler is anything to go by, you could do several thousand more words on Mr Simpson alone.
Q x