Euryleia's 5th Level Three Assignment

[Mad Lews]

Hi ER,
This piece has the feel of something that was pulled out of the middle of a more complete story.
It's obvious there is a bit of history before these events and you fill us in well enough for this stand alone to work but you've got me curious.
That's a good thing BTW.
I found a couple real minor glitches only because I thought I must, call it respecting the Dean.

Sam laughed. “Would you believe poor impulse control?” She sighed, running her fingernails down the back of Jillian’s neck and over her shoulders. Letting her fingertips caress the Jillian’s back, she explained, “I was surprised by your accusation and reacted badly. I just need to figure out how a way to get out of this situation in a way that will benefit us both.”

last sentence 'how a way' slipped past your editrx chose one or the other.

next a more general problem when you deal with same sex romance, the pronouns are needed but sometimes get confusing.

Sam released Jillian’s nipple and dragged her pants and underwear down to her bound ankles. Standing up, she removed her (own? Jillian's arms are still bound right?) silk suit jacket and draped it over the table.

The problem, develops when the reader is skimming along and comes to the point where they say "But which she/her?" Often the context helps and when possible you can use distinct mannerisms, tones of voice, or idiosyncratic figures of speech to tell the protagonist apart but in the end you may need to use names more often in this situation when pronouns are not clear.

“P.****ease(call me slow, I’m not sure what you are trying to convey, is that an exaggerated pronunciation like Puuulease! or just a breathless stutter ). Please, put it on me.” Jillian strained against the restraints as she begged. “Please fuck me.”

Moving to the head of the table, Sam laid out the rope. Finding the center and making a loop, she ordered, “Bring your hands together.” Deftly, she wound the rope around four times before tying a knot through the bight(loop might work better) even though you just used it or maybe cinching it through the circle of rope... bight is just a bit exotic for most vocabularies.

All that being said I do believe its time you moved along, the fourth level awaits you as soon as I get clearance from the powers that be.
When you are able look about and check out the newer ice breaking assignment. pick a sin any sin...

Yours Mad Lews