Euryleia's own Ice breaker thread

[Mad Lews]

Nice work Euryliea,
It wasn’t so hard once you got going, right?
You seem to have gotten some form of all seven words in and included three of the sentences as required. More importantly you’ve created some interesting characters using your words and their own to paint some intriguing portraits. The scene is vivid and you leave the reader wanting to know more. Well done!

Yeah well it’s not all that complete, more of a scene than a story. Where’s the end! Just a cute little two word send off and a fuck you very much. No wonder she finished it in under 5000 words.
And while we’re on the subject some of them words were pretty damn awkward, like she was really stretching to fit them in, like she was showing off her vocabulary just to impress the reader.

Hey fuck off Lews,
You were the one that made her use those words; it’s not as if she had a choice. You may be right about the ending but we weren’t looking for a novel. It’s a god damn ice breaker .

Hey she chose the words not me. Now you apologize this instant or…

Scuffle ensues with much posturing and loud curses. When those two are done we’ll come up with a real assignment. I think it was a cute story. I wouldn’t mind seeing how it turns out, if the muse moves the story along and you want to post it over there.
I’ll try and get an assignment together tomorrow.
Yours
Mad Lews

ps, Next time you spank the muse can we watch?
just for technical pointers you understand...