Thank you so much. This is gold, you're giving me.

I know I do the fragment thing too much. I love it but I'm not good at it. I want to become good at it so I overuse it. I do recognize that.

And that 'impeccable' comment. The right word choice is so important to me. Thank you so much. I'm thanking you too much. It just feels so good to have somebody tearing up my work again.

I would love to submit it. I think I could do a couple more drafts with what you've given me. Then I'll send it.