Pre-story question:

[maddie]

csr: Reverse peanut butter cup is how I refer to the extreme opposite of vanilla. They're both flavors of ice cream that I've found and enjoyed.

[Aussiegirl1]

csr: Reverse peanut butter cup is how I refer to the extreme opposite of vanilla. They're both flavors of ice cream that I've found and enjoyed.

Maddie, I love that term!

Kadence, I agree with what has been said above. It is your story, and though you obviously want to make your story a good one, you need to be happy with it. The more stories I write and submit to the site, the more I can see how different stories will attract different readers.

I used to worry about making my story suit the audience reading it, but know I just try to make it a story I would want to read. Do let the readers know it has a slow start and just see what happens.

Good luck and I look forward to reading your work.