Song Lyrics

[Widget]

Very nice,

I liked #5 and #7 the best. For the last one I keep wondering, does he ever come back, was he worthy of what she offered? It sort of reminds of a print I have "The Meeting on the Turret Stairs" by Sir Frederic Burton

I hope you post some more of these.

[freddie_clegg]

Thanks Subwife, Rabbit, Maddie, redhot33 & Widget.

Bouquets or brickbats, feed-back is always great.

Widget, not sure if there will be anymore for this month's contest (I've been pretty busy on Market Forces on the main board) but I've got a couple of ideas for other lyric based, short tales like these so will post eventually.

Regards

Freddie