"The little pumpkin definitely needs a little bell attached to her 'clit' and some collagen for some real 'fuck me' lips. I dont' know how you'd work it into the story, but if her breasts were adjusted so that they were a little less perfect, maybe she'd be less proud to show them in her see through blouse. (Not that a b-cup is anything to get excited about)"

Thank you.

Nice drawing BTW. Which one are you?

I like the idea of the peirced prick with a ring and a bell. I want to draw as much attention to his dick as possible. I like the contrast of feminizing him--collegen-fed fuck-me lip while exposing him as a man.

The breasts are important too. I' want to write in some serious, painful, dick, balls and breast torure. ANd I consider transexuals dicks from head to toe.

Good suggestions all. Thanks again.