Thank you.

Some last words () to the story: you're right, it was my intention to repeat "much" in "As much as she feared the upcoming events, as much she craved the warm sunlight." to underline her ambivalent feelings.

And yes, it is meant to be "in cage and bondage" without "the". I had the idea to establish the term "in cage", following the phrases "in bondage", "in slavery", ...



I really enjoyed this Level 2 - your assignments are fresh and fancy. Someone may call the use of the same basic story for several assignments boring, but it forces to truly go into the narration, reveal details and learn to describe from different points of view.

Again: thanks, Aussiegirl.


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