Hi Cadela --

I own a bdsm publishing house (e-books only), and it's pretty likely that once you've taken and implemented the great advice you got from Aussiegirl and Mad Lews, your story would be fit to publish on my site.

I actually was about to give you all the same advice, point for point, so consider it doubled, and I hope to see a sample from you in my email someday! Try webmaster at bdsmbooks.com to reach me.