I can appreciate what you're saying, but it seems more poetic than thought out... For instance, what exactly do you mean when you say that you "believe that Love/god was in every crack..."? "His love oozed through the quake."? And this last one is the one that some might interpret offensively..."his light shone on every dying soul". I get the sentiment, that you believe that God was present in the situation. If you were wording for poetic reasons, ok...that would make sense. But if you are stating those things as reasons why the eartquake proves there is a God, then I think explaining a little wouldn't hurt, because I don't know what kind of argument that is..