I love this story so far. It really has 'mood', although it is quite intense.

Maybe the lack of response due to the story being already too long for people to jump into. I'm still not up to date yet.

Makes me wonder whether people read more than a fraction of what they download! I think with so many stories coming onto the site all the time, the longer ones are the least likely to be read, whether high quality or not.

I hope to say more about The Organization when I'm up to date.