Smiles...

Thanks Moggy,

I have read lots of long stories, some became boring, others, created almost a friendship with different characters.

That's exactly what happened with Alexa and Guli in this series. I immediately identified with her emotionally.

Ruthie's ability to describe the depth of her submission first to Master Stephen, then to Master Charles touched me.

Also the characterization of Master Charles, his deliberate and conscious methods in dealing with slaves serves to give him depth I seldom see in a character.

When I read a story just for the "heat" of it, the characterizations are important. Yet with this novella, and a few others I am enjoying, the ability to care about, and feel for the characters intensifies the enjoyment.

Now, I hope for length, so that said relationships aren't ended with the feeling of, "Hey, wait a minute, what happened when..."

Thank you for commenting, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, *wink* maybe if you also have feelings about the two main slaves, Ruthies muse will unfold it (trying not to give away further chapters you have not read), with a happy ending.

As it stands now, reading this story is like watching a mini series, her ability to hang the reader on the suspense hook is excellent.

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