I can see where your coming from, yes I was setting the scene rather than plot. we needed development of time, place and person. Can't believe in a character if you don't know where they have come from and where they are going.
I like your ideas, the jungle in particular. The prison setting well away from prying eyes. But how about political prisoners, those that have fought against the state.
The hunt is a nice twist, and rape. I don't know about the romance bit, maybe Ok if its a means to an end. Such as the romance element is someone used just for the escape and hopefully to avoid recapture. But this story could have so many twists and turns that any author could write what they want and place it in any part of the BDSM library.
Though I still would want the element of forced sex with the risk of pregnancy. I've read too many stories that describe the rape and brutal treatment of the victim, but few consider the consequences.
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