Quote Originally Posted by Qmoq
Aussiegirl, another lovely story. As I always do, I try to see what it is I like with your stories - with this one, it's the relentless building of atmosphere, from about 1/3 of the way into the story, up to the end. It's almost as though I can't wait to get to the next paragraph!

I love it. Last month's competition was great - this month's is even better.

Q xx
Thanks Q, I love hearing what you like about my stories, you always seem to find something interesting to share with me.


Very nice story, and an interesting twist there. Quite a sense of build throughout, a fine piece of writing.

I really have enjoyed everything in this "contest" (are we even competing for anything? I don't care, it all makes good reading).
Timberwolf, Thank you for your comment. I am glad you liked the twist. I too agree with you about not caring about who wins and what they get. To me the contest is about sharing our work with our friends here on the forum.


Hi there *waves* and very nice indeed. I too liked the twist at the end.

Thanks Widget, Glad you enjoyed it and the twist.