Looking good. Only one minor thing: You have corrected a sentence to She would be thinking could she trust this man? -- yet there's still something odd with it. It is neither direct speech (no quotation marks, and "she" instead of "I"), nor indirect speech (for that, an "if" or a "whether" is needed, or you have to get rid of the She would be thinking... -- which, in turn, would change the p.o.v. again). Think about it on your way to Level 2.

Don't become too excited by the fact that you've needed just two assignments for Level 1 -- in Level 2 a guest instructor is already waiting for you, and he won't be as lenient as I am...