Praise, Comments, or Suggestions for the New Lord Mobius's Dungeon

[Jadetiger]

Damn Ruby, you're gonna kill my vibe!!!!

Wow. I posted quite a bit tonight as I felt I had to respond to every single thing in there... and I am so damn hot!!!!

You are amazing Ruby... totally amazing. Thank you for making a deep desire come true.

You are sizzling yourself. I can't wait, between Ruby and you I am starting to melt. Of course in the right place.

[Myya]

Wow!! One heck of a story going on there, been having a bunch of computer problems (( I hate technology sometimes.)) So don't wait up for me

Wish I could thank Yuri properly though oooo, I need to get this fixed asap!

[Ruby]

Thanks BabySub, Jade and Myya for the compliments.

Myya, I'm sure you'll find a way to thank him properly when you get your computer troubles behind you. I, for one, can't wait to read about it.

Thanks to everyone who's had the time to jump in and help out this little bit of story line. I get exciting reading your character's reactions. So perhaps later tonight, after I've done some more work, we'll find out what happens next.

Much later....

[Microwave0ven]

Very nice collars. The purple one is purrrfect for me.
It just needs a few stars. :-)

I'll find a way to put stars on these things..eventually.. no time to spare for now


awww, much later.. Anyway, when i think of roleplay, one of the words that always comes to mind is FUN!!! I'm really enjoying this storyline so far!

[Ruby]

Thank you, Sir Chuck!

This little sub is all heated up and ready to read some more.
You are soooo good at what you do!

Happy to be at your service and mutual pleasure,

Ruby

[Chuckdom19]

Thank you, Sir Chuck!

This little sub is all heated up and ready to read some more.
You are soooo good at what you do!

Happy to be at your service and mutual pleasure,

Ruby

Then I guess I'd better finish it, eh?

[Chuckdom19]

Jade, BabySub, Ruby, your writing is just blowing me away. It is sensuous, hot, and in some places near poetry. You can't find writing this well done in many places.

My spirit is moved with your creations and your mind-pictures. I thank you for finding the time to share your talent with all of us.

Lord Sir Chksng19 (since there's another 'chuck' now)

[littleslut]

Well I got another idea for a plot twist littleslut becomes pregnant (Shock horror!!). Well at the moment it’s only an idea so I would like all you wonderful peoples comments about this. How practical do you think it would be to write in as a plot? Any other suggestions and any offers to be the lucky Daddy!

Thanks in advance for you input

ls
xxx

[Mobius]

Well I got another idea for a plot twist littleslut becomes pregnant (Shock horror!!). Well at the moment it’s only an idea so I would like all you wonderful peoples comments about this. How practical do you think it would be to write in as a plot? Any other suggestions and any offers to be the lucky Daddy!

Thanks in advance for you input

ls
xxx

While the Idea of a Forced pregancy is hot erotic and kinky. Then we have the problem of what to do with the resulting baby/child. While I am not above fantasicing about a little incest. I am not real comfortible with children in erotic situations. Perhaps we send the fetus to a swiss boarding school and she (of course it is a she) comes back when she is 17 and very nobile.
Beware the alian he has designs on inter species mating. (no I am not going to write that)

[littleslut]

The one way around that that I can see is for me to leave the dungeon only to come back for visits and maybe a bit of free babysitting . In essence gaining trustee status after the birth.

That objection aside, are there any other points that anyone can think of that would prevent me writing this unless of course there is somebody who strongly disagrees with this the I wont carry on.

ls x

[Ruby]

Hi LittleSlut,

While I prefer to think that we're all on birth control in the dungeon,
if you want to have a baby, I have no objections. Like Mobius, I don't want to see a child in the dungeon. Nobody under 18 should be visiting, let alone living there. Incest is also out for me. My vamps may be connected by blood, but not by birth. :-)

I do suggest that someone volunteer to be the father of your virtual child or that you let a character that's non-real have the honors - like the alien, Dracubus, etc. You can always do the mystical pregnancy, where the baby is born and ages to a full grown adult in less than a year. And as the mother of that character, he/she would be another extension of you, so you would be responsible for the care, feeding and well being of this new person.

Please give everyone a few days to think about and comment on your plot twist before you write it into the storyline. We'll be interest in your ideas as they solidify.

What a delightful soap opera the dungeon has become. I look forward to each new adventure.

[Jadetiger]

The one way around that that I can see is for me to leave the dungeon only to come back for visits and maybe a bit of free babysitting . In essence gaining trustee status after the birth.

That objection aside, are there any other points that anyone can think of that would prevent me writing this unless of course there is somebody who strongly disagrees with this the I wont carry on.

ls x

Littleslut,
I have to be honest. This makes me a little uncomfortable for a lot of different reasons. I am quite aware that this is all fantasy but as long as you keep the fantasy child safe and from harm my reason don't really matter. This is a place for fantasies and I can deal with it. And I would love to babysit for you.
I must admit this reply has brought me back down to earth. I have to thank you, maybe now I can get some work done.

Hugs and Kisses.
Jade

[Mobius]

Since every one in the dungeon is vampirehead. Would the child end up like the little vampire that was in interview with a vampire.

Were she is bitten at the young age of 7 and has to stay that way.

Probly not a good Idea. I dont want the dungeon to be a den of pediphiles.
Maybe you go through a prolonged pregnancy and then you give birth. Then you come across the wizard or the alian and zot she is 18 and ready to be inslaved. Of course the mother would be incharge of the daughter and help in her training. (Sorry I like lesbian incest ) Some may not. As long as it is over the age of consent I do not see a problem with it. Not like the daughter is going to get pregged like if it was father daughter.

Lets not get into a discussion on the pros and cons of incest as I would surly lose.

Just remember this is a vertual dungeon. It is not real people.

[BabySub]

Aaannnd Ruby does it again. LOL. This is costing me a fortune in batteries, never mind finger power!

Jade, I've been meaning to pm you for a while now and tell you how much I'm enjoying your posts. :: wink wink, nudge nudge :: Heh. They're damn awesome, and I can't wait to read them when I see you've posted. Please carry on. (as long as you don't mind me using Yuri now and then, lol)

Sir Chksng, you flatter me. All I'm doing is replying to Ruby's posts, responding to what her amazing mind comes up with. So far. Just gimme a night alone with Yuri, and I'll see what I can dream up. I'm loving you and Ruby just now. Can I get my hands on her too..? :: plots ::

Littleslut, I'm not gonna say one way or the other regarding your story idea. I don't hate it, but I don't like it either. How's that for non-committal? LOL. I wouldn't be overly comfortable with a baby/child in the dungeon, but could be ok with a baby/child growing up quickly thanks to magic or whatever. Not sure.

I've not had much chance or energy to post elsewhere in the board lately, but this has all grabbed me by the pussy and forced me to submit to it.

:: goes to try and bring life to her vibe ::

[littleslut]

Ok well it seems that the general consensus is against it so ill scrap that idea.

Well thanks to everyone for there input and if I come up with any more ideas then ill make sure to run it before you guys

ls x