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    Cool

    Oh I have found my little home away from home here...I love to write poetry...so here you go...poem #1...enjoy!


    I think I've forgotten you,
    That my heart can move on,
    But from nowhere,
    Your smile fills my world.

    The pain of rejection returns.
    Old thoughts fill my mind.
    Dreams and wishes yet unfulfilled.

    I listen as you talk,
    Comments and opinions of others,
    The reality of never fitting your mold,
    That I'll never be good enough,
    Never pretty enough,
    Never slim enough.

    I'll never be good enough.
    I could make you happy,
    But still yet...it's not enough.

    How could I have ever dream,
    That you could want someone,
    Someone like me?
    That you would see me as beautiful,
    That you could ever want me?

    How could I dream?
    When my life is a nightmare?
    What lies behind us, What lies before us, Are tiny matters, Compared to what lies within us!

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    Aw, I just wanted to say I really love all your poems, they are all so good and filled with emotion. This one is great too and really moving. I don’t want to sound like a broken record every time I respond to one of your posts here but once again GREAT JOB!!!

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    Another very good piece here.
    Mit diesem Herz hab ich die Macht
    die Augenlider zu erpressen
    ich singe bis der Tag erwacht
    ein heller Schein am Firmament
    Mein Herz brennt

    - Rammstein

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    A long deep sigh escaped me after reading your words. Lovely poem, Freedom. Thank you for sharing it.

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    oh this peom spoke to me...for many, many reasons...very well done.
    Should you need anything, need to make a comment or suggestion please feel free to PM or email me at superopposite@gmail.com


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    Very nice indeed, thanks for sharing.


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    Ahh yes the eternal relationship insecurities and issues we project on those around us. The sense of never feeling good enough.

    I thought your poem captured them well and it took me back to a time when...
    Quantum physics, worm holes, string theory... it teaches us what surfers already know... to ride a wave is to be one with the universe, the creation and the creator.
    - Bear Woznick (tandem surfer, waterman, pirate)

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    That was a great poem...made me think.

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    Quote Originally Posted by freedom37803 View Post
    Oh I have found my little home away from home here...I love to write poetry...so here you go...poem #1...enjoy!
    Glad you found this home and please continue your poetry it was great.
    WB

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