Reviews written by Electrosadist
Stopped at the Border:
Rating: 10 out of 10 (May 13, 2012)
Review: One of my favourites! Oh how I long for a new story! I consider taking up my own writing when I get to read these wonderful and exciting stories from Cortez. The best BDSM writer of them all!
(May 15, 2012)
Though it seems that the end of the text has been interrupted. Could it be fixed?
Rating: 9 out of 10 (Apr 15, 2012)
Review: I love this one as well. Just miss those wires...... ;-)
Rating: 9 out of 10 (Apr 1, 2012)
Review: Good to see you´re back here Cortez! I liked this one as well. Extremely well written! But even more if that story of the South American prison would have been the main story... as always. :-) Hope to read some more about little Mandy Jones adventures again soon... Maybe she'll be the one on the chair soon, feeling those electrified needles? ;-)
by Von Schmiser
Rating: 10 out of 10 (Mar 10, 2006)
Review: This is an absolute ten! Cortez style... I hope that the unfortunate girl will learn the horrors of electricity, very sooon... Make it much torture and little or even no sex please. /Electrosadist
(Mar 11, 2006)
Thank you kindly for the roses....I wish I were worthy to carry the shoes of Cortez...He is my inspiration and try to be as vivid as he..As for our young lady.....stand by..the electrician cometh.....another chapter tonite...Chapter 3......Chapter 2 is in their hands and should appear soon....I like to keep the sex out too.....Im a extreme,violent torture person....Thx again..
by Mark Fritz
Rating: 10 out of 10 (Feb 27, 2006)
Review: Well well... you are a very talented writer indeed! A German answer to Cortez? I really liked the first chapter, the soul in it, the description of the way the both torturers really enjoyed the pain they inflicted on their helpless young victim... And the total feeling of power over their victims. And also, special thanks to you for one small but arousing detail: she was not shaved...
When will pt 2 be posted? And, I hope that these two guys favourite method of torture is the same as mine... electricity... Oh so much I hope for that... :-)))
(Aug 25, 2006)
I just added a second chapter to "Montagsfolter", title of the whole story now "In den Haenden der Geheimpolizei". Got problems loading it to bdsmlibrary, so the story is to be find at http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/foltermann
Hope you like it! Their favourite method is the same as yours... But the victim is darkhaired this time, so the guys decided to shave her cunt. Sorry for that!
The Colonel's Memoirs:
Rating: 9 out of 10 (Jul 3, 2005)
Review: Part 2 is a masterpiece. I really like it. Yes, Cortez is a favourite, but Bond cathces up fast on him... As Cortez does not write any new stuff, it's very satisfying that guys like Bond posts very good stories like this one. I'd like to know some more about that special unit though... :-)) Critizism: just a matter of taste, but rape... Rape is dull. Too many authors writes about rape, but only a few authors writes good electrotorture stuff. That's what gets me going anyway... /Electrosadist
Rating: 10 out of 10 (Jul 30, 2005)
Review: Very, very arousing... Dr Saavik sure has the right touch, and a way with words!!! Especially the elecrotorture of Becky was really something... A most inspiring story. If you wish to share story ideas, please feel free to send me an e-mail! email@example.com
(Aug 26, 2005)
Thank you Electrosadist.
We have since been in touch via email and, if you watch some of the coming chapters, a number of your idea have been incorporated in the story.
The Wooden Chair:
Rating: 10 out of 10 (Jan 8, 2005)
"The Wooden Chair" is one more of my favourites... Yes, I just love these modern settings, the interrogation plot and the military prison environment and the electro torture of course... The victimn's terror slowly developing, the torture slowly getting more and more severe... Cortez is a master at that. I personally think he makes them better than the stories from ancient times, even though they are very exciting as well. I'm not usually a friend of stories about torturing two girls together; I believe their vulnerability increases by being lonely with the torturer/s. But sometimes it works, as in this story. Thanks for the effort to write for us Cortez!!
Cortez, as you wrote that you welcome ideas, I found a description of what took place in Villa Grimaldi in Chile back in the '70 that I'd like to share with you. Besides from the fact that it actually happened (which is disgusting), I find it useful in a fantasy story:
"Within Villa Grimaldi there were rooms specifically designed for torture. Some agents applied different methods of torture and others, usually officials, conducted the interrogations. The latter sometimes also personally applied the torture. In some cases, during interrogations with or without torture, another person would take notes with a typewriter.
The most common torture method was electrical shock, consisting of a metal rack to which the naked prisoner was tied and then electrical current would be applied to different parts of his or her body, especially the most sensitive areas such as the lips or genitals or even on wounds or metallic prostheses. One particularly cruel variation of this method consisted in further pressuring the subject of interrogation by placing him on the bottom rack of a double bunk bed and torturing a family member or friend above him."
The idea of a 30 something mother in the bottom bed and her teenage daughter on the topfloor of the bunk bed excites me a lot and gives the author possibilties to concentrate both on the tortured daughter and on the mentally suffering, though naked, mother. (May I suggest them to be hairy...? :-D )
I have also thought about a story about a torture school, where electrical torture is performed rather clinically and without cause, other than educational reasons.
Hope you like the ideas and find them useful! Rgds, /Electrosadist/ firstname.lastname@example.org
A Session on the Bars:
Rating: 10 out of 10 (Jun 28, 2003)
Review: This was the first story ever from Cortez that I read, at RPP:s site. It is still my favourite. It opened a new world for me.
I have written some stories on the similar fetish myself (one of them posted here at The Library) but I don't by any means have the skill to use the language as Cortez has. It is fascinating how he/she uses the words to create that feeling of utter cruelty and helplessness for the victim, the feeling that is oh so extremely arousing for sadists by heart, like me... And I don't think, like other who gives reviews, that everything has to be explained in the story. It's even more exciting when some questions may be unanswered, open to the mind of the reader to answer themselves...
Cortez, please continue to write stories, you inspire others to write as well. I am very grateful for what you have given just by writing those delicate stories...
I have not written anything myself in a long time but will try to produce at least one or two short stories soon. (I have some ideas of interrogation stories, containing electrotorture of course, and anyone wanting to write may share them with me.)
Cortez, I also like it when you revice or prolong the stories, like you did with this one. Can you please do more of that between the new stories?
Best greetings from Electrosadist email@example.com
(Jul 17, 2005)
Many thanks for your kind remarks.I owe you a debt of thanks because it was reading a(then uncredited) version of your South American Interrogation story that started me off down this particular road. There will be other stories to come but like all of us who have to earn a living too...sometimes the time and space to sit and write is difficult to find. I find you tend to get disapproving looks from the nosey ones in the next seat as you write using a laptop on trains for example...ah well!
Again, there will be more and many thanks for the comments.
(Jul 17, 2005)
Thanks Cortez for the good news! And if you need ideas and a proof reader (well I know you don't need either, I just try to get a sneak peep at the upcoming lovely stories...), you know my e-mailadress... :-))) /E