Feedback: Rebecca's Revenge

[Mad Lews]

Hi Alex,
It still has punch in the re-reading. The new perspectives and details flesh it out nicely. BTW phallic is the adjective of phallus the noun. (quick change that before eb sees! I'll try to distract her.)
Hey EB,
Nice boots ya got there. Not to put the cart before the horse but do ya have an outfit that matches those? Hold on a moment, let me just check I think I have a buggy whip around here somewhere….
Mad

[Alex Bragi]

Hi Alex,
It still has punch in the re-reading. The new perspectives and details flesh it out nicely. BTW phallic is the adjective of phallus the noun. (quick change that before eb sees! I'll try to distract her.)

Done! *hugs* Thanks, Mad, you're always kind to me.