Hi Rhabbi,
Just a little nit pickin coming from my SIGOT(significant other)
while AAR is easy she missed it
SOG isn't too hard but maybe say it somewhere near its first use or better yet in the title of the report something like 'Special Operations Group 4 (SOG-4)'
explaining fists we went into.
The other one is the ships
CES Lexington
CSE Howler
CSE Phoenix
OK this ain't crucial to the story but which is it CES or CSE ? and what does it stand for?
like I said not crucial and causes hardly a pause in the reading but may leave a nasty itch on some readers minds.
Maybe at the end when the shocked Admiral exclaims "are you telling me a (whatever CSE is) that we lost (40?) years ago saved the bacon of .....
however you want to do it I'd just be happy to see you work it in somehow and Sally would like it too.
and keeping Sally happy is important to Mad
so now it's important to you.
take care and when can we expect the rewrite?
anytime after 12:00 is good for me.
Mad Lews