First Assignment for isabeau6

[Rhabbi]

hehe - that's quite OK. It's part and parcel of being a writer that we like what we write to be read and to receive feedback. I should have left a quick note yesterday to say I'd read your piece (instead of just silently subscribing to the thread).

Yeah, that is a bit aggravting to all of us, and I am guilty of it as well. But I cannot find the time to pull apart all the stories here.

isabeau, I will do that for your story and either post it or PM you by the end of the week.

[isabeau6]

Yeah, that is a bit aggravting to all of us, and I am guilty of it as well. But I cannot find the time to pull apart all the stories here.

isabeau, I will do that for your story and either post it or PM you by the end of the week.

eeks looking forward to it i think lol...i need all the help i can get so that i can begin to write with more creativity and uniqueness, which is missing..most of the stories i have written are almost direct fantasies of my own...i will be honored by both of your critiques...