Quote Originally Posted by Rhabbi View Post
Trying to tempt us poor defensless men ruby?
Yes. Yes, I was.

Actually, I have been waiting for moptop to post this as I was hoping to see some changes from the one she posted earlier. Alas, same text as far as I can tell.
Changes, huh? What type of suggestions do you have?

What did you like about this story that you'd want moptop to keep?