OK

I know you both, along with the spectators, have been waiting a long time for this. Every time I sit down to write this I end up working on other chapters, which will not be posted here. This section is not quite working for me, but this is what I have. I have rewritten it a few times, and do not like the feel even now. It may just be that I am being to picky though, after all, everyone really liked that one story that I never liked the feel of, and I never think any of them are quite right.