Quote Originally Posted by Rhabbi View Post
OK

I know you both, along with the spectators, have been waiting a long time for this.
Sorry, I was busy going extinct.

Every time I sit down to write this I end up working on other chapters, which will not be posted here.
Stop sitting.

This section is not quite working for me, but this is what I have. I have rewritten it a few times, and do not like the feel even now.
Yeah, I know the feeling.

It may just be that I am being to picky though, after all, everyone really liked that one story that I never liked the feel of, and I never think any of them are quite right.
Good. That means you won't settle. It means you will get better. It means that critisism won't be wasted on you.

I will get to the reading as soon as time permits. I am sure you managed to improve upon it. Of course, I will rip the throat out of it if I can. Gently, though.