Oh, moptop, you are right, perhaps it is interesting that I noticed the men's compliments more than the criticisms...hmmm, sounds like I have a personal problem there.

I have learned that patience and web forum writing classes go very well together...maybe the danger of correcting your own work the way you did is that it seems you already have a good idea of what to do next...

There are at least five other stories I want to review here, and I have not been able to all I want to.

I appreciate the note Ruby. I was not feeling impatient. I have had a lot on my plate this week as well. My feelings never get hurt when online forum stuff takes some time. Took me weeks to get this far with this assignment, I can't expect everyone to jump up and review it when I finally get it posted.

moptop, please don't feel unloved. I cannot speak for anyone else, but I think you are worth reading. Perhaps folks are just waiting for you to fix the stuff you already think needs fixing.

Oh, kitty, keep writing, and I am sure someone else will rip on it soon.

Hugs,
Bewsitchingly