Sorry about that Rhabbi,
I thought I was waiting for you to do (yet another) rewrite on the intro. When in doubt ask, I'm getting older and senior moment may occur at random I'm told.

I would love to rip the story but haven't seen an update since 7/10.
that one I pounced on for form and pace but failed to mention I liked the direction you were going in with with the actual story.

Now I'm of two minds as to how to proceed. There are folks who would swear you need to plot this out in your head and on paper and then its a simple matter of back filling to come up with a nice tight story. (Patterson, Cole, Clancy)
Others say, screw the plot, its the characters that drive the story, (them's the ones that tend to write those 1000+ page books that turn into quintilogys or worse like Tad Williams, Stephen King)
How would you feel about doing the next chapter as a character driven piece then follow that by a tightly plotted action piece just to see some strengths and weaknesses of each technique?

Don't need to go crazy here just a couple thousand words per chapter We don't want to strain Mr Deans vocabulary besides if you hurry you might get it done before he's back.

Sorry for the delay, we seem to have miscommunicateD

Mad Lews