Midnite's First Assignment

[Midnite]

Hi midnite,


The last bit, where he mentions the breeding or animal training farms, takes this story in a new direction, then leaves the reader wanting.

Are his threats something that could happen in the universe of this story?

There is much to be explored here and I look forward to seeing where you take this,

Ruby

I wrote this as a short scene/chapter, I wasn't sure if you wanted the whole story, which could be quite long. Yes this really could happen in Ian and Jennifer's universe, Ian runs a large slaver organization, one of the ways he makes money is providing trained slaves. Most of his slaves are captured at an early age, and then trained as a slave. Some of the slaves are retained for breeding.the female offspring that they give birth are kept and trained as slaves. Forced bestiality is a very popular activity in this universe, so another way that Ian adds to his fortune is to train male animals to rape human females, I didn't think that you girls wanted me to get into a long story about this, so this is just kind of an introductory chapter.I know, I have a really sick mind.

[Ruby]

I wrote this as a short scene/chapter, I wasn't sure if you wanted the whole story, which could be quite long. Yes this really could happen in Ian and Jennifer's universe, Ian runs a large slaver organization, one of the ways he makes money is providing trained slaves. Most of his slaves are captured at an early age, and then trained as a slave. Some of the slaves are retained for breeding.the female offspring that they give birth are kept and trained as slaves. Forced bestiality is a very popular activity in this universe, so another way that Ian adds to his fortune is to train male animals to rape human females, I didn't think that you girls wanted me to get into a long story about this, so this is just kind of an introductory chapter.I know, I have a really sick mind.

Ah, thanks for the explanation.

It sounds like you've got a well thought out universe in your head to write about and enjoy.

You've followed the assignment as Muse gave it and hopefully she'll have time to look at your updated version sooner rather than later.