You had a fun challenge SK and you did a good job with it. The part in the middle where there was a lot of back and forth discussion was effectively written verbal sparring. One comment led to another and all of a sudden, it was a spat. Just great! I could hear it.

Later on you just hinted at her consequences with just the right amount of restraint. You conveyed that these two have been together for awhile and still have that spark for each other.

Thanks for a fun piece to read.