Tyvm for the feedback...I see My tendency to overkill My idea...like describing it to death, somebody gag My pen PLEASE!!! LOL. I still have alot to learn editing/grammatical wise and run on wise, killing the internal editor/mouthful of extra words guy inside as well. Again, tyvn for the help, critique, and instruction, and HOPEFULLY My next assignment will go alot better.
DM
P.S. Do I wait for My next assignment, do I redo/rewrite this again and submit...where do I/We go from here?