OK...NP, will get on it...I will do the rewrite and get it right...thanx
DM

P.S. some of the grammatical/wording changes in the piece do NOT make sense:

She turned and climbed into the shower, and I (liked) the world. And the “Tootsie Roll” may never know the word liked does NOT seem to fit properly, and I did notice My punctuation did make the sentence a P.O.S. for lack of a better choice of words...is there an editing style per se to avoid errors like this, MSWord seems useless or wrong to Me alot?