Demon_Master, it is easier to write a new story - therefore you should rewrite this one.

And, it is worth it. The red is not there because I like to use it or because I like to hack stories.You could get a decent short piece.

That IS the idea of editing. You write a story, it gets edited, then you rewrite it along the lines of the edits, and hopefully learn something from it. Simpler narrative style is not easier.

Please remember, everybody's stories are edited. Everybody's. Going thought your story again will make you write better. I am sure you can do it.