Demon_Masters 1st Lvl 1 Assignment

[Nikita]

OK...NP, will get on it...I will do the rewrite and get it right...thanx
DM

P.S. some of the grammatical/wording changes in the piece do NOT make sense:

She turned and climbed into the shower, and I (liked) the world. And the “Tootsie Roll” may never know the word liked does NOT seem to fit properly, and I did notice My punctuation did make the sentence a P.O.S. for lack of a better choice of words...is there an editing style per se to avoid errors like this, MSWord seems useless or wrong to Me alot?

DM,

Just a few points.

I took a look at the example you quoted above that doesn't make sense to you, compared it to the original, and Pejanon's feedback. In this case, it looks to me like he fixed your sentence grammatically.

In said sentence, (liked) is the past tense of the word (like) Read the sentence corrections and notice the verbs agree in tense. She 'climbed' and I 'liked.'

I use MS Word tools like you do and their suggestions are generally 40% right and 60% wrong, but they do catch things like repeated words, mispellings, and usage.

Some of the suggested wording is not absolute. Just take it into consideration when you re-formulate what you want to say in the sentence. You don't have to use the suggested wording as written, but, they should trigger what you want to say...better. Understand?

In the case of corrections, they mostly have to do with grammar.

Always, always read your story aloud when you it's finished. It is easier to edit this way.

Hope this makes your re-write easier.

To your success.