The red text in brackets replaces the red text in front of it. Sorry, I could not use strikethrough now. The bracket may contain further comment.

If the text is just reddened, you attention is drawn to it. You an either remove it or find a better expression.

She turned and climbed into the shower, and I liked the world. And the “Tootsie Roll” may never know… but you can bet I will be watching again.

I changed ‘like’ to liked. It should’ve been [COLOR=”Red”]like(liked) [/COLOR] but I also wanted to draw your attention to it. “Liked’ is ok, but consider finding a better, more precise expression. (happy? at peace with?) It can be a crucial word in the story, pointing out your character’s mental state at the end of the story. Your character does change during the story so pointing it out more precisely creates a sense of character development.

The second red in the quite points out the new sentence.


Hope this helps.