I liked it too and Venom has done a terrific job with his critique. I too think that in this case it isn't scat play. I've written such stuff too and never used the 'scat-tag'.
Quote Originally Posted by Saridu View Post
Well it's not serious, my understanding is this is reserved for actual BDSM practices and realistic situations - I write fantasy ;-)
Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too