News Story - The making of a Scene?

[Ozme52]

Here's the story... which I'm titling: Too Late For Contrition <<== a link


It boils down to this... So in the heat of the moment, the coach of this school full of good Christian girls put a walloping on the dyslexic, learning disabled, school girls.

Now the girls are embarrassed by the press stories and want to be absolved.

Well.... maybe I'm just too easily amused by this, but it made me think of the perfect scene... (Female) coach and girls are sent to the somewhat disciplinarian minded headmaster of the rival school and his staff, where they find that the punishment is a bit more than merely embarassing.

What other news stories have you seen that would be easy to turn into a full fledged scene?

[Ozme52]

Well then, here's another. Skin City

An island beach town... converted by the new "owners" and some of the local ordinances have made it "the" destination of the summer. All luggage is inspected on arrival.

Come on folk. A little help with this thread.

[SOUTHERN GENTLEMAN]

Well I'M dyslexic and have learning disabilities,(forgive my spelling and grammer), and I"M a CHRISTIAN, so I'll keep these aspects out of my scenario.

The Covenant team and coaches are told to be at their school at 7:00 the next morning. Upon their arrival they are loaded onto the school bus and told they are being taken to Dallas School to be punished for their lack of class. Once they arrive at Dalles at 7:30 they are forcably stripped and put on wooden ponies, one per team memeber and coach. Their arms are bound behind them. A trainer gag is put in their mouth, and tied to the ceiling so they are forced upright and held there. Each wooden pony has a flogger draped over it. There's a sign at the Interance to Dallas that says each student gets to whack each Covenant team memeber and coach 1 time as they come in and get ready for class. ( you do the math on how many times that is) They also are to whack them once as they go by changing classes during the day. Because the Covenant team are athelets they can RIDE the pony along time. But even they give out. That happens around lunch break. So the covenant team and coaches spend the afternoon in pure agony as they are severely punished.

The folks that were cheering were the player's Moms. They are taken to Dallas at 5:00 pm Friday and given their punishment until 7:00 am Monday morning when they have to have their daughters at school on time.

Mom's punishment is another story.

All team members are seniors and 18 years old, (NO KIDDIE PORN HERE).

[SOUTHERN GENTLEMAN]

If you build it they will come. You've built a scenaior and they will cum. Give them time to drive to the ball park. "BUILD IT AND THEY WILL CUM". S G.