I had posted a question in the Story Feedback forum, only to realize this is probably a more suitable forum for it.

I am the author of a nc/humiliation/submission story, currently in its fifth part where the female protagonist is on the verge of being transformed into the office slut (against her will of course). I would like to know your views, as writers of your own stories or readers of others' stories - which is more important: progressing the plot of the story and keeping the pace up, OR spending more time on unfolding how the limits of the main character is being pushed and how her psyche is slowly being altered?

It would be interesting to see how many people would vote for 1. moving the story along to other (different, potentially more extreme) situations which the female protagonist gets trapped into and the logical conclusion of the story, versus 2. a few chapters more exploring how she is gradually being led deeper into becoming a true office slut (at the risk that this slows down the pace of the story).

It would be great to hear from you all. thanks.