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    Attention New Students ~~ Writing Assignment here.

    This assignment is for

    Shecallsmemaster
    Amberxiao
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    Kishi
    tessa


    Please post your assignment in a separate thread.

    Assignment:

    Was anyone's "first time" all that they would have wanted it to be? Now is your chance for a do-over. Set the scene for your "fantasy deflowering". You can go into the actual sex if you like, but the crux of this assignment is to set the scene. Bring me into the moment. Let me experince the setting through you.

    Remember to layer as many of the senses as possible.

    Ready, set, deflower yourself. (just the way you would have wanted it to be)
    “To be completely woman you need a master and in him, a compass for your life. You need a man you can look up to and respect. If you dethrone him, it is no wonder that you are discontented, and discontented women are not loved for long.”
    - Marlene Dietrich


    NOTE TO SELF: "Sadistic rat bastard, Sir!" is not a safeword!


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    I have a question:

    I've been having difficulty with this because in general, my fiction tends to be very different from my life. I know the theory of "write what you know", but what would be ideal for me is very different from what would be ideal for a character.

    Plus, my own deflowering was very nice, and would be hard to top in fiction without it becoming wildly implausible (which I also don't want to do). But, again, I don't want to write autobiography, I want to write fiction.

    Second, should the character *know* ahead of time that they're going to be deflowered or should it happen as a surprise or does it not matter?

    Third, do we have to use first person, that is, the way you have the assignment is to assume it's us, as writers, reliving a better first time, so that would imply first person as well.

    I'd like to modify it to write a deflowering scene that went well for a fictional character, if possible. Not necessarily ideal, either, because I find perfection boring, but definitely good... Is that too far out of bounds of your assignment? If so, I'll try to do it as written, but I fear it will be horrid.
    Oh night thou was my guide
    Oh night more loving than the rising sun
    Oh night that joined the lover
    To the beloved one
    Transforming each of them into the other

    The Dark Night, by St. John of the Cross
    Arranged and adapted by Loreena McKennitt

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    First person is nto essential. Actually it is the hardest POV to write well. Write the scene you speak of and it will be just fine.
    “To be completely woman you need a master and in him, a compass for your life. You need a man you can look up to and respect. If you dethrone him, it is no wonder that you are discontented, and discontented women are not loved for long.”
    - Marlene Dietrich


    NOTE TO SELF: "Sadistic rat bastard, Sir!" is not a safeword!


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