Major Littmann
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Thanks for the review. You are right of course it ends in a sort of 'lets get this over with'. That is partly because when I started to write I was going to interview myself (weird I know but..) but I wandered off plot. The other thing is that I have done the 'going through the mill' bit and will have to think of a strong plot to add incentive to the character's actions. Never mind, it is as it is! My other two contributions are really quite long enough! Thanks once again; reviews take just five minutes and 20 words but it seems that most readers have writers block.


all the best,

Irene

Hi Silversea.
I haven't signed in for while so I missed your message, I really like to give something back to those who take the trouble to post stories on this site, either a Wow 10/10 or a 2/10 do us all a big favour and take up gardening.
I really like anything different, Modern Slavery was a great new twist on an old theme, but there are so many badly written unimaginitive stories around.
Have you written any stories?
I did one a while ago as a protest about censorship and I have a sequel which I may post under this Username but I guess I got sidetracked into reviewing.
Perhaps we will talk sometime.
Hermann

Hi I saw your reviews for Modern Slavery, I love the story too. You like some of my favorite stories, I would love to talk sometime

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