Anonymouse - Assignment 2

[anonymouse]

Well, this definately stirs the imagination, I agree with Dragon's Muse about the possiblities. I would definately like to see more and can see where this can lead into your favorite scenario.

My only real complaint is that the story is to short, I was just getting hooked when you enede it. I know this is more nitpicking than anything, but we could have gone into the office and settled inot it a bit before she found out waht she was getting into.

I considered taking the story into the office but decided against as I simply have too many ideas about what happens in there. Besides, cliffhanger endings excite me

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[Rhabbi]

Besides, cliffhanger endings excite me

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Believe me, we've noticed. lol

[anonymouse]

Believe me, we've noticed. lol

lol

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[Satan_Klaus]

I'm amazed how you coped with your opening line, considering that it was very specific. You turned it into something I had not expected.

However, I have to agree with the others: Your story is more of an appetizer


Satan_Klaus

[anonymouse]

I'm amazed how you coped with your opening line, considering that it was very specific. You turned it into something I had not expected.

However, I have to agree with the others: Your story is more of an appetizer


Satan_Klaus

The opening line Muse gave to me was indeed a challenge. Usually, a writer writes themself into a corner. This was a good exercise in how to write out of a corner.

As for the brevity of the piece, your comment(s) are noted. If I can find time today, I'll add a bit more to the story. Since everybody already probably have their own thoughts as to where the story might head, hopefully I can manage to surprise you some more

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