Quote Originally Posted by Rhabbi View Post
Well, this definately stirs the imagination, I agree with Dragon's Muse about the possiblities. I would definately like to see more and can see where this can lead into your favorite scenario.

My only real complaint is that the story is to short, I was just getting hooked when you enede it. I know this is more nitpicking than anything, but we could have gone into the office and settled inot it a bit before she found out waht she was getting into.
I considered taking the story into the office but decided against as I simply have too many ideas about what happens in there. Besides, cliffhanger endings excite me

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