First assignment for Mishka

[Mishka]

The first time I read it, I thought it was a continuation of the reverie. An easy way to fix this is to precede that line with something that alerts the reader of a scene change -- from Christine's thoughts back to the room in which she's tied. The story tended to gallop from there to the end as well

Excellent idea, I felt that was a bit awkward. I like my characters so I want to keep them for future use. Thanks!

[tessa]

Mishkalicious!!!! Yay!! You're here!

Loved it and loved it more! What a wonderful story!

~huggles all over you~

tessa

[anonymouse]

Excellent idea, I felt that was a bit awkward. I like my characters so I want to keep them for future use. Thanks!

I've lived with all my characters for quite a few years. I sometimes dress them differently or give them new names, but they all take turns to appear in my stories.

anonymouse