Level Two- tessa's second assignment

[Aussiegirl1]

Nice one tessa!

Despite the fact you found it hard at first to get used to not using the spell checker, you did a great job. It seems that once you forgot about the task and just wrote from your heart, you were fine.

There are no major changes needed. As annoymouse pointed out, watch out for the use of too many explanation marks. You have a good grasp of commas, and I found only one place where one is needed instead of a full stop, and that after "this" in the following sentences.

I will say this. It was wonderful to sit and talk with someone whose jaw didn’t drop to the floor when spankings or being tied up were mentioned.

I loved the atmosphere of the story, and could relate so well to the anticipation of meeting someone you know online. It flowed very well and I wished I was there with you!

Thanks again and you can move onto the third assignment as soon as you wish.

[tessa]

Hey, Mad Lews? You can look up my godling any time you want to.

Thank you Aussiegirl, for your time in evaluating this and for your comments. Both very much appreciated by me.

On to assignment 3. I'm bringing sexy back, I think. Wickedly so, I hope.

[Mad Lews]

Hey, Mad Lews? You can look up my godling any time you want to.

Jee tessa,
What kind of pervert do you take me for?
Lews

[tessa]

Jee tessa,
What kind of pervert do you take me for?
Lews

The really, really good kind.

[Aussiegirl1]

Hey, Mad Lews? You can look up my godling any time you want to.

Thank you Aussiegirl, for your time in evaluating this and for your comments. Both very much appreciated by me.

On to assignment 3. I'm bringing sexy back, I think. Wickedly so, I hope.

Thanks tessa, it is a real pleasure to do this job when I have lovely students like you!

Sexy and wicked, by favourite combination LOL Looking forward to it already!

[H Dean]

As annoymouse pointed out, watch out for the use of too many explanation marks.

What's an explanation mark?

[Aussiegirl1]

What's an explanation mark?

It was all a very well planned trick to see how observant my students were of course! LOL

Don't believe that? ..................... OH well, I guess it is lucky I have a week off, my brain needs it! H Dean, I submit for my flogging, just be gentle with me

[Mad Lews]

It was all a very well planned trick to see how observant my students were of course! LOL

Don't believe that? ..................... OH well, I guess it is lucky I have a week off, my brain needs it! H Dean, I submit for my flogging, just be gentle with me

A gentle flogging? Administered by a gentleman I suppose??
Oh no, it's Mr. Dean!
To quote Tessa, "mind if I watch?"


Mad

[Aussiegirl1]

A gentle flogging? Administered by a gentleman I suppose??
Oh no, it's Mr. Dean!
To quote Tessa, "mind if I watch?"


Mad

LOL Well, so long as you don't want to pick up the flogger too, you are welcome to watch!

I can see I might be in a bit of trouble with hoping Mr Dean would be gentle, but then if you can't trust a friend to look after you, who can you trust? Mind you, if that growl is any indication of what to expect............... even friendship might not save me!

[Mad Lews]

LOL Well, so long as you don't want to pick up the flogger too, you are welcome to watch!

Flogger, nah I prefer the crop for punishment and the hairbrush for fun, though a hand on a smart little rump can be entertaining too.

Hey is that Simon & Garfinkle singin' at the park?
Mad

[H Dean]

Hey is that Simon & Garfinkle singin' at the park?
Mad

No, "At the zoo". I don't think they ever sang a song called "At the Park".