tessa's assignment- finally

[Mad Lews]

Ok, because you both made basically the same comment about this, I will say the following:

Trust me when I say that the whole wrapping around of legs issue is quite doable and quite effective. No problematic a bit, considering the situation in which it occured. I am changing the line in the story because writing, after all, is intended for the reader. That the author knows differently is enough.

While Mad is willing to be convinced, Lews feels a demonstration is in order.
Barring that he's willing to settle for some 8X10 color glossy photos. You know the address right?
Mad

[tessa]

While Mad is willing to be convinced, Lews feels a demonstration is in order.
Barring that he's willing to settle for some 8X10 color glossy photos. You know the address right?
Mad

Would you settle for 5X7 black and whites? No? Well, I would. Damn the lack of cameras that day.

And Mad? Lews told me that you wanted the demo more than he did. Despite his drooling nature, I believe him.

Still, the story does read better now, thanks to your suggestion, Mr. Mad. Despite what may, or may not have, occured.

Yours truly-
tessa

[Mad Lews]

Would you settle for 5X7 black and whites? No? Well, I would. Damn the lack of cameras that day.

And Mad? Lews told me that you wanted the demo more than he did. Despite his drooling nature, I believe him.

Still, the story does read better now, thanks to your suggestion, Mr. Mad. Despite what may, or may not have, occured.

Yours truly-
tessa

Sometimes it not what actually occurred but what should have occurred that counts.

Ask any reporter for the New York Times.
5X7 black and whites will do in a pinch. I hope you don't have to recreate the entire scene over and over again just as research. If you do, go with a digital camera and find a volunteer photographer. We will accept posted .jpg files
Looks left and right, can only spot Lews waving his hands eagerly willingly volunteering just to be helpful.
The things you have to just to get past Ruby. Hope it's worth it
Mad