Thrall's first assignment

[thrall]

High heat

Hello everyone.

I’m all about brutal truth and honesty. So please feel free to give me your best shots.

This is truly only the second story I have ever tried to write in my entire life so I won’t be offended by what you might say. Trust me I know how to laugh at myself, and won’t be hurt.

That being said……………

Dragons Muse stands on the mound, high heat blazing in her eyes, as the new untested slugger she walks out of the dugout.

Thrall steps up the plate, seeing the danger, she plants her feet and squares her shoulders. Knowing what’s about to come, she squints her eyes, ready for the pitch.

Dragons Muse winds up and sends a 100mph fast ball straight at Thralls head.

CRACK!

The sound reverberates through the stadium as all eyes see the bat shatter.

The ball is passing the mound, across the field, and over the high fence, and sunk to the bottom of the bay.

Sorry just a bit of nervous humor………..I couldn’t resist.

Now I just need to figure out how to cut and paste……….LOL

[Rhabbi]

High heat

Hello everyone.

I’m all about brutal truth and honesty. So please feel free to give me your best shots.

This is truly only the second story I have ever tried to write in my entire life so I won’t be offended by what you might say. Trust me I know how to laugh at myself, and won’t be hurt.

That being said……………

Dragons Muse stands on the mound, high heat blazing in her eyes, as the new untested slugger she walks out of the dugout.

Thrall steps up the plate, seeing the danger, she plants her feet and squares her shoulders. Knowing what’s about to come, she squints her eyes, ready for the pitch.

Dragons Muse winds up and sends a 100mph fast ball straight at Thralls head.

CRACK!

The sound reverberates through the stadium as all eyes see the bat shatter.

The ball is passing the mound, across the field, and over the high fence, and sunk to the bottom of the bay.

Sorry just a bit of nervous humor………..I couldn’t resist.

Now I just need to figure out how to cut and paste……….LOL

muse, since she hit this one off you, I am going to let you pick up the pieces.

[tessa]

Oh, thrall! It is such an erotically beautiful story! The "burn" you gave your character most certainly comes from within you.

I enjoyed every word. I was able to do so because you let me feel each one.

Wonderful.

~hugs~
tessa