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[chromedome11]

Very nice, Darkmagi. I've taken the liberty of suggesting the following edits:

2. "sooth" s/b "smooth" or "soothe"
4. I would put a ? at the end
6. "vice like" s/b "vice-like"
9. "hand is" is singular, but the rest of the verse is plural. Change to "hands are", and "palms"
12. "it's" s/b "its"
16. "lips gets" s/b "lips get"

[Darkmagi]

Cheers for the editing advice, always welcome